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Song Parodies -> "Trouble on the Line"
Original Song Title:
"Trouble on the Line"
(MP3)Original Performer:
Sawyer Brown
Parody Song Title:
"Trouble on the Line"
Parody Written by:
Wolverine
The Lyrics
Moderator I must have a bad connection
If you've got someone readin' me
I changed the tempo, then I changed the song
Moderator can't you see
There's trouble on the line
Rhymes are gonna fall
It happens every time
I bang my head against the wall
My vocab's broken down
Just why I can't define
I'm pleading for some help, I'm
Having trouble on the line
Moderator my funny bone's been disconnected
I've lost my mental faculties
I don't have a choice
Just send me your invoice
Moderator help me please
There's trouble on the line
Rhymes are gonna fall
It happens every time
I bang my head against the wall
My vocab's broken down
Just why I can't define
I'm pleading for some help, I'm
Having trouble on the line
There's trouble on the line
Rhymes are gonna fall
It happens every time
I bang my head against the wall
My vocab's broken down
Just why I can't define
I'm pleading for some help, I'm
Having trouble on the line
No matter what the song is
I'm having trouble on the line
If you've got someone readin' me
I changed the tempo, then I changed the song
Moderator can't you see
There's trouble on the line
Rhymes are gonna fall
It happens every time
I bang my head against the wall
My vocab's broken down
Just why I can't define
I'm pleading for some help, I'm
Having trouble on the line
Moderator my funny bone's been disconnected
I've lost my mental faculties
I don't have a choice
Just send me your invoice
Moderator help me please
There's trouble on the line
Rhymes are gonna fall
It happens every time
I bang my head against the wall
My vocab's broken down
Just why I can't define
I'm pleading for some help, I'm
Having trouble on the line
There's trouble on the line
Rhymes are gonna fall
It happens every time
I bang my head against the wall
My vocab's broken down
Just why I can't define
I'm pleading for some help, I'm
Having trouble on the line
No matter what the song is
I'm having trouble on the line
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| 5 | 11 | 10 | 10 |
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Nice idea and clever switching
Thanks AFW.
(ABC3) DKTOS, but it reads well. I can tell you were trying to retain the spirit of the original...maybe did it too well.
Well, Agri, maybe he had writer's block (lol). Seriously, good work.---MM
Thanks Agri and MM. Actually, I'm having more writer's block on a U song. I've submitted one, but I'm not sure if I want that for the ABC U contest. Just haven't come up with anything else.
(ABC3-T) I have a soft spot for parodies about parodies (it's just below my belly button). This one hits it dead centre.
(ABC3T) Again I DKTOS, but read well.
(ABC) DKTOS, and you could've varied a bit more, but I can identify with this.
ABC - Good
Thanks Bob, Jason, Cat, and Max. Bob, I'll try to keep it more above-the-belt next time. :-) Cat, that's something I'm trying to work on. I'm used to going with the song. If the original repeats, I repeat. It was mentioned on another parody I had previously wrote that I submitted here as well.
(ABC3T) too much repetition to score votes Wolverine, but a good idea - I guess you had trouble on the lines - 555 (and re your last comment, yes, although it makes logical sense to repeat lines if the OS has done that, it's become a bit of a thing at amiright that you put the extra work in anyway, to avoid boring repetition and to make it more enjoyable for the reader) - 555
(ABC3T) Not a lot to this one but, I did find it interesting.
Not bad for a n00b, you'll learn my friend, you'll learn
(ABC3T) I really like the idea behind this, Wolfy. As has been said already, you need to vary the choruses and not leave too much of the OS in, but overall a good effort. 555
Thank you Stuart, Rick C, Matthias, and Kristof.
(ABC) Well-structured, could have used more variation in the choruses, but a good effort.
(ABC3-T) It's not often I agree with everyone above me, but so it is here. Sorry to have trouble voting 5s, but 544 was the best I could do. Still, not bad at all. Keep writing!
ABC...I once called myself a pretty big Sawyer Brown fan...and this reminds me of a fun "oldie" of sorts. I've had trouble with a lot of lines in my time doing parodies...so I can relate, too.
Pretty good, 5s
I remember Sawyer Brown. Not bad, I agree with the variation on choruses comments.
Thanks Johnny D, Red Ant, Arwen, Jack, and Jeff.
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